6/27/2007

Okay, this is one of my earlier ones and it is a little cheesy but I still like it. It's all rhyme-ish. I am glad to say it is not how I feel today. Unfortunately, I did not write the date I wrote it. Hope you like it!

This pain inside so hard to show
Though I deny it, they all know
My heart is now on the floor
To comfort me must be a chore
Wanting to feel so strong, and I try
I cannot shed the tear in my eye
Would someone hold me, broken down
Can't be sure there's one around
How long can I hide
Such pain inside
Pretend each day I do not care
But I'm sure they are all aware
Must I be the one to speak
Or will the others search and seek
From here I walk the line alone
Someone find me, bring me home

5 comments:

Kewljen said...

This is not cheesy, it is very good! Thanks for sharing! And just for the record, you are not alone :) You have me!!

Unconscious said...

Nice, and well done, it makes me sad.

Jamm-o-rama said...

I know now that I am not alone. :) This was written like 4 or 5 years ago. Now, I got all my sista's & me!

Kewljen said...

What about your borthas - haha!!

Jamm-o-rama said...

Oh yes, and my bortha's! Shout out to the bortha's & sista's!